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This is kind of a redo. Technically, its a redo of a redo. ^^;
The original is called "feel my fire" and its floating somewhere in my gallery looking awful. I think this version is better but there are loads of mistakes still >_>
Anyway, the original looked totally different :XD: he had more clothes, less fire and....legs.
I dunno, Im just messing around drawing Nathaldron when I should be doing other things. As usual. He just wont leave me alone T_T

Image/Nathaldron (C) to me, no stealing or he will set you on fire. I used a ref, a picture in a manga book by Christopher Hart, though its kinda different.
BTW, my tablet is fucked and its very difficult to clean up images now :rage: so sorry if there are loads of black dots on the white areas.

EDIT: this is now avaliable on a magnet and a keyring! Please check it out ^_^ [link]

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:iconandantonius:
Looks fantastic! Love the colors, and the blue swirl is very dynamic. You did a good job with getting the blue light on him, too; I couldn't imagine doing that with colored pencils. xD

The one thing that stands out to me, though, is the abs. I don't think there's a pair right under the pecs like that (they sort of start in the little belly area, about where your second row starts, maybe a bit lower), and then the lower two sets are barely visible at all and kind of fade in to the crotch.

But, apart from that, it's excellent! The face is well done, and your hair and shading are awesome as always! 8D
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:iconhighwaymanartist:
okay you know I like most (all?) of your work and whilst i'll compliment you till the sky turns green but will always let you know if i see anything which to me looks slightly off and you are requesting critque so here goes... to me the torso looks a little long, with regards to the arms, however there could be some foreshortening going on. if there is it may be fine. :D I fear to say this because I would hate for you to quit because of tiny things but the head. how much drix and dron have i seen since i have watched you? A LOT something about the head screams wrong but i don't know what. I apologise if that's no help.

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The colouring in it is amazing.

I think Christopher Hart is the guy that did that anatomy book I brought :XD:

The only critique I have really is Is he like transforming in this picture cause of the 8pack?

I hate giving critique =(

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I really love the color work on this! There isn't much better than blue and purple! :) I do think it gives the impression more of water than fire though, but I think that's just your color choices. Really nice anyway, and a new fave!
:icontattered00wings:
O3o OOooh! That's neat! But are you trying something new with his hair? It looks really different for some reason.

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:iconkmcgeijyutsuka:
I still can't get over your amazing coloring skills! I wish I could get that kind of look with traditional coloring mediums! :love:

And I love his hair too! :heart: It's to die for! :D You rock hun! :hug:

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^_^
And I blended a little white into the black hair....not sure if I like it though :/

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:iconvegetathealmighty:
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Yep, its the same guy!!
I lifted the 8 pack stright off his drawing :shrug: sometimes you see guys with an 8 pack. I dont think its anatomically possible ^^; but Dronnie is magic so I'll blag it :XD:
Thank ye!

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:blush: Thanks dear, Im really glad you like him. Getting a compliment from someone as good as you is really brilliant for me :love:

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